This article probably has to be in one of my top lists for very confusing. I had to read it twice over just to make sure that I understood everything right. It seemed to me that it was a story about a guy working at a mom and pop store who gets a crush on some girl, who walks in with her friends. Then he's just sitting there and fantasizing about talking to them, his boss kind of embarrasses them because they barely have any clothes on and then he just decides to up and quit.
That is what I understood from it but everything in between was very confusing and hard to get through my head. Especially the part where it starts with "Oh Daddy" I'm guessing it was one of the girls talking to her father. I started to think that I was reading a completely different story. I felt like it was narrator jumping from character back to narrator, which is what goes on in a story. I don't know maybe its me, maybe I have a hard time reading things like this, it was pretty late in the night and I guess I got confused.
Although I have to admit that it was a pretty funny and interesting story I actually enjoyed reading this. It is a little better than the other articles we have read so far. I read this story all the way through. I think that this is a piece that many people can relate to. I know a lot of people who have worked at grocery stores and absolutely hate their jobs because of the customers that they have to deal with on a daily bases.
The narration is bit jumpy at times, Keisha...
ReplyDeleteLook back at the way Sammy ridicules the customers. He doesn't like his job, especially the customers. It's about the cute girls, but also foreshadows the fact the he wants out.
Some things take a couple of reads to sink in.
Glad you found this one at least a little enjoyable : )