Wednesday, February 16, 2011
Literacy & Voice Questions - In Class Response
(4/5/6) We think that it's becoming more common for an individual's voice to be a patchwork of quotations and borrowed ideas. Taking into account technology's effect on voice (making it much easier to borrow ideas from other people), we think it's more difficult for a person to develop their own voice.
Questioning Our Literacy
I think, to find one’s own voice, you have to write how you feel comfortable with and in a way that gets the point across. We believe the writer might take bits and pieces of anothers' opinion but not all of it. Once they read some topic, that idea is in the mind of the other person and the writer works from there to construct their idea. Everyone’s voice is kind of a patchwork of others but by doing that, we are able to create our own.
By copying a voice or someone else's voice, writers might not exactly have their own genuinely authentic voice of their own. I think many people would like to keep to the norm, so there is little room for variations in writing. In school, it might be hard to grow a new, unique voice because teachers (at least in high schools and middle schools) try to make their students write in a certain way because some ways of writing might be too “out there.” Not trying to bash the school system or how teachers teach, but sometimes they try to push their thoughts, habits, and ways of writing onto their students.
“It depends on what you open yourself up to…what you experience and even how you’re raised.”
“I think it goes back to what we said earlier… you adopt certain ideas from other readings and use a combination of them to make your own voice. … it really depends on each person because it varies”
The media plays a big role because it exposes societies to certain things that could influence certain behaviours, way of speaking, and even people’s way of life.
Literacy and Voice Questions
4. It seems that the idea of voice and identity as is seen in writing can also be seen in music. One artist may have a similar sound to another, but they still have their own voice. We, as writers, may not have completely original ideas but we can take the ideas and information from others and shape it with our own voice and experiences.
5. A writer's voice can seem more authentic to us, but may not seem so to someone else because that authenticity can be subjective. An example of this could be seen in political writers, who some people respect while others see as biased.
6. Imitation is important in constructing our own sense of self because we can find ourselves in the voices of others, then build off of that. Music, once again, can serve as an example of this because we can relate to lyrics and take those feelings or ideas as our own.
Literacy and Voice Questions - In Class
In Class Questions 2/16/11
4) It is hard to find your own voice when you feel like everyone else has already said everything that could be said or done. Just like Mr. Cash said you can take some things that other people do, but you have to do it in your own way. People need to put their own twist on what they do to make it theirs or create some individuality. It is very possible, the challenge is making something seem as though it is your own.
5) Yes, some people project themselves in their own ways better than others. For example comedian's must have their own individuality in order to draw people to them. Also, a persons ethos has allot to do with how a person projects themselves. If you walk the walk, you gotta talk the talk.
6) In order to base who you are you have to look up to someone or have an idol. This sets the foundation for who you would like to be, but you are able to be yourself at the same time. For example, if you want to be a musician, you cannot just come up with your own genre, you have to have something to base your style on.
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4. Its more ambiguous to find your voice amongst the crowd, especially when you are active in so many mediums. There are a more influences now than ever that affect your "voice" and they are more easy to access than ever before. Its harder to make a unique voice but having a personal voice is still possible.
5. Obviously voices that dont follow the rules or are on the outside of normal are more authentic than others. People who dont just ramble off all the same word garbage as everyone else seem to be more authentic. Only the people who go directly with the flow seem to have become caught up and less authentic with the devloment of technology.
6.It seems like people use imitation of other to shape what people think about them. They are doing this to shape their outward sense of self in order make others think things about them. The idea being that others will like what they have said and they will be more relateable. Mimicry also show what we identify with and shapes our self to things similar to that.
literacy and voice- in class
5. With today's technology, we are exposed to so much knowledge, opinions and voices. We think its impossible to have an 'authentic' voice because anything and everything can influence your ideas. Anything you write was influenced by something else. Especially as college students, when we are assigned a paper, we may take into consideration the views and opinions of the person grading the paper. In my gender and communications class, my teacher is an extreme feminist so when I'm assigned a paper about my opinions about topics that come out of feminist movements, I'm more likely to be influenced by my teacher's voice rather than my own.
6. In today's society, imitation plays a huge role in our lives. I can't tell you how many papers or discussions i've been involved with about 'who is your role model'. As a society, so many of us want to mimic someone we may see on tv, in movies or even a stranger on the street. In the writing aspect, many papers require sources. We are required to include sources of other people's voices, knowledge or life experiences. No matter who you see or what you do, you are influenced by someone or something else.
Joan Didion- Why I Write
As I read Joan Didion's "Why I Write" this line stood out to me.And even though it doesn't represent the reading I wanted to write about it anyway. It made me think about how many people seem to only be able to see themselves this way. Only knowing and focusing on the cant's of their life. I know that I have looked at my life this way and I can say from experience that this can be destructive to a persons self esteem. For example some one who focuses on things like not being able to do well in classes might drop out, when in reality they might be struggling in class but they are doing really well in sports. Instead of dropping out they focus on getting help with their work so they can participate in sports.
Another reason I think it stuck out to me is because it sort of talks about Identity. Because if your focused on the negative then you are going to view yourself in a negative way.Causing other people to also see you in that negative way. In the same way if you focuse on the positives ten so will everyone else.
Why I Write - Joan Didion
"...there's no getting around the fact that setting words on paper is the tactic of a secret bully, an invasion, an imposition of the writer's sensibility on the reader's most private space."
How cool is that? I think that is so awesome to think about. Anything I read is "an invasion" into my mind, and every time something I have written is read, I am invading the minds of others.
It sounds like science-fiction or something, but it's true. Every time we read something, we filter it with the knowledge and opinions we already have. Sometimes, though, those things we read can really impact our thoughts and help us to create new ones.
In the same way, each and every time we write something we let the page be the mediator and tool by which we dive into our readers' minds.
That should be why we write: in order to impact our readers' thoughts with our own. Writing is always so much better when it has a cut, clear purpose embedded throughout the words. So why would anyone want to write something that really has no goal or purpose? Such writing is a waste of time.
Writing is not a way of saying, "I have all the answers! Listen to me!" Many times people write to simply develop more ideas and thoughts. Joan talks about a novel she wrote, and how she had so many questions about her characters while writing her book. She kept writing and finished the story to answer her own questions that developed. She wrote in order to discover.
Joan Didion
I can relate to this so much. This whole piece I found myself thinking “wow she’s like me!” Her imagery, the way her mind works, her way of writing; how she starts her novels with no idea where the novel is going. I enjoyed this reading a lot. I think her point is that her reason to write is not controlled by her. I believe she is saying her mind that she doesn’t quite understand is the reason she writes. She writes to better understand the way she interrupts things. I too find myself doing this.
When she says, “In short I tried to think. I failed” This is what happens to me when I’m trying to write a research paper or something I have no interest in what so ever. I find myself getting caught up in the words thinking about how dull and bland they are. When I have to write for a class I do just this, I think. Thinking only leads me to failure and un-satisfaction. I find that when I let the words flow then revise what I have written when it is all out onto paper I am most satisfied. This to me is Didion’s point.
Shared Motivation
I can understand Joan's troubles, though. She talks about being distracted, and that I can relate to. When the time comes, I can and will sit down and focus, but before the final countdown begins, I will dillydally as long as I can with other, more eventful things. The one thing she said, though, is that writing is an act of saying "I." I don't agree with this whatsoever. In high school, I had to write a persuasive paper for something I did not believe in. I wrote that paper because I had to, but I did not say "See this topic MY way" or "Think the way I do." I did it because it was a chance to expose the reader to a different mindset, but it doesn't have to be my own.
Why I Write
I have to admit that if you don't follow along closely in the the Didion piece you can get lost easily. Or should I say, I, Allison, can. I found myself rereading Why I Write because, at first, I just skimmed it. One minute she's talking about things shimmering, and the next, she's talking about cannibalized Fairchild F-227s. Maybe she's too descriptive. Sometimes I just want her to get to the point. I don't always need to know that her character's sandals are sticking to the asphalt(we get it, it's hot outside), I just want to know what her thoughts and intentions are as she's walking on that asphalt.
Motives
Orwell stated that motives for writing usually fall under four different categories, and it is hard to tell which ones influence us the most sometimes. However, he admits that he knows which one ‘deserves to be followed’, which is writing with a political purpose. I personally welcome the idea of changing hearts and minds through writing or other means—it can be powerful, and its effects are at times immeasurable. I also think that egoism is always a motive in almost everything that people do, whether it is weak or strong. It doesn’t always have to be in expected ways, such as gains in approval, reputation, or recognition—it could be to make oneself wiser, to test ones limits, or to be a part of something bigger than ones self.
Just the thought of Orwell reminded me of a comic I bookmarked a while ago, which can really make you think if you haven’t thought about it too much before: http://www.recombinantrecords.net/images/2009-05-Amusing-Ourselves-to-Death.png
Orwell also mentioned his upbringing, and how his loneliness as a child attributed towards some of the reasons why he welcomed writing as a medium. I think that it is interesting, just reflecting on my life, how a lot of the negative instances in my life had more of a positive impact than all the good things that have happened. In fact, a lot of good things that happen to me have some negative consequences that go with them. I think that there is some kind of slippery slope effect that starts at ones childhood and can stick with them for the rest of their life. A lot of important development happens then, and it really can define us in that sort of way.
side note: I was suppose to post on Monday, but I went into this week thinking that Wednesday was the day for me to post (looked at 3/14 instead of 2/14.)
"Why I Write" by Joan Didion
“Let me tell you one thing about why writers write: had I known the answer to any of these questions I would never have needed to write a novel.”
Didion is not the first writer I have seen say something like this. Like Didion did not know who the narrator would be for her novel, Jay Asher has said that he didn’t know who the speaker was going to be in his debut novel, Thirteen Reasons Why (an interview in the bonus material of the book). He had to see where the story took him and then revise. It turned out that the book goes between the speaker, Clay Jensen, and the audio of the tapes Hannah recorded for him and 12 others. Laurie Halse Anderson said about her popular book Speak (in an interview in the platinum edition) that she did not know in the beginning where the story was going. She said that the girl, Melinda, came to her in a nightmare and was trying to tell her something and she just had to write it down. Just as the reader doesn’t know until later in the book that Melinda had been raped, Anderson said she didn’t either.
I also thought it was interesting how Didion said that she couldn’t think. She said that she focused on concrete images or the “peripheral.” It’s strange to think that someone who is clearly intelligent, having written multiple novels, feels that she fails to think because she does so differently than others.
Joan Didion Why I Write
I can also relate to her when she says that she has a hard time focusing on either what she is reading or writing i think that is very common. It is hard to sit and read an article or a whole book because sometimes you get distracted. Writing definitely can bring some of the biggest distractions, just a simple mark on the wall can take your focus and attention off what you are doing.
The rest of the article she talks about comparing writing to maybe imagery. I don't think I imagine pictures when i am writing i just try to stay on topic and focused. I don't see how seeing pictures and images is going to help.
Tuesday, February 15, 2011
joan didion- why i write
I also like the way she describes herself as a writer. "By which I mean not a “good” writer or a “bad” writer but simply a writer, a person whose most absorbed and passionate hours are spent arranging words on pieces of paper."
Joan Didion-Why I Write
Joan Didion
Monday, February 14, 2011
Why I Write
In-Class: Why Write?
Why Write?
Why Write?
Why Write?
Writing could also be looked upon as art some people take it very seriously. I think that it could be a skill, something that takes a long time to master. Not a lot of people are great at it but writing is good because it is another form of expression.
Why Write?
Why Write
I write because I have to and because I want to. There's no way around it for 99% of anybody whose ever been or ever will be successful. Writing is just a part of life. A reason I like writing is that even if it's a research paper, you can still be highly creative. You get to choose the words you write and it's freeing.
Why Write?
As I said in my blog post about Joan Didion’s reason for her writing, I can agree with her reason which is to sway the reader’s opinion towards your own, to change their mind. You want to have what you’re writing provoke some thought out of your readers.
Another reason to write would be to get out onto paper what you can’t say in person. Writing can be a great way to express yourself and your ideas. From writing a novel, a short story, a thesis or even a poem can be a great way of expressing yourself. I know that I can express myself in writing better than just having a conversation and I’m sure there are a lot of people who are the same way as me.Why Write?
Why Write?
Another reason why people write is to tell others of a story or an expierence that people will find interesting. People like to read about other people and expierences they have gone through so it is good to write so that people can enjoy and appreciate what you have went through.
The last reason why I think it is a good idea to write is to persuade people to a particular idea. You can find a lot of persuasive writing in campaigns when trying to persuade voters on a candidate to choose. There are many different reasons why people should write and I think that they are all equally important.
Why Write?
Writing lets you put your thoughts out in front of you.
It lets you share information and knowledge with others.
Writing helps you organize your thoughts, your knowledge,and your ideas.
Reasons to write
A big part of writing is that generally people feel more comfortable conveying information this way instead of spoken word. Public speaking is a very common and dominant fear in many people, and also involves other things to worry about when trying to get a message across, such as body language, tone of voice, posture, and confidence. Writing takes the message down to the simplest form, leaving out the other factors.
Why Write?
Why Write?
Writing One Thought at a Time
George Orwell included this in his entry about writing: "I knew that I had a facility with words and a power of facing unpleasant facts, and I felt that this created a sort of private world in which I could get my own back for my failure in everyday life." I liked his idea of a "private world" because I think writing can help create that. It is just a way for one's own thoughts to come to life, even if no one else sees them.
Why do I Write??
Why Write? in class assignment
Why Write?
In Class- Why Write?
Why Write?
Why Write?
Why Write?
why write?
I think that is a great example of writing's liberating capabilities. Sometimes I even avoid writing because I know that along the way I will put something down that maybe I don't want to deal with at the moment. That is the beauty about writing, everything you feel/want to say is already in your head you just haven't discovered what it means or maybe you just didn't have the courage to address it, but writing forces you to. Writing is very powerful that way.
Plus, sometimes saying things aloud just isn't enough to get people to understand your point, see your side, know how you feel, etc. Writing for me can be far more structured and thought out than spoken word. Sometimes I get flustered or I just can't come up with the right thing to say, so writing allows me to take my time and devise meaningful and clear thoughts.
In Class: Why Write?
In class blog, why write?
A&P - For Last Week.
In my days of working a lot of what is said I could relate too. When working in the summer it is usually slow and I wait at my register scoping my store for any good-looking girls my age. As he mentioned the store is like a pinball machine, you may spot a cutie and then she is gone and you never know where she is going to pop back up. If I were in this particular situation, I would have handled it differently, instead of quitting. I too would have told the girls to cover themselves up when they come to my store because they were not at the beach. This may be because I have been an employee for such a long time and I do not care as much if I tell people how it is because the truth is what people need.
Overall, I cannot believe that he quit because his manager embarrassed the girls, and the fact that his mom and dad were family friends of the managers. It really just does not make much sense, and it almost seems as though he wanted to quit in the first place and was looking for an excuse. In the end, he is left with his white shirt, no job and no girls.
Why I Write?
Why I Write
In our reading selection this week, Joan Didion talks about why she writes. I like how, at the beginning of her essay, she says that writing is almost a hostile act, telling people to listen to you and change their mind to see it my way. I thought that was a very good explanation of the purpose of writing something. Subconsciously, I’ve found myself doing this exact thing; trying to sway the reader to my side.
Why?
Taking abstract thoughts and tieing them to real things is what I usually what I do just the same as our auther this week. I like how she decides to travel around to get inspiration and gather ideas and concepts to help her write. It makes me happy to think that someone has such a passion about them to work for their art.
Using picture to express ones thoughts in the mind is such a great analogy for what actually happens to me when I attempt to write. In the long run though, it makes sense that no one knows what process writers use. However, going to the extent of writing a novel is sort of silly.
Why I Write.
Why I write
If you've yet to create a picture in your mind, full of images and words and actions then you can't possibly write meaningful, passionate work. Everything will just be useless words designed to make the reader happy when indeed writing is really "the act of saying I," so the writer has to have an image in their mind already in order to create the voice of "I." That is waht Didion is saying, that we have to have a story in our mind about the way we think things should be except that the image in our mind is incomplete and so we write to uncover the answers/meanings of our mind. If we already knew the answers, we would have no business writing in the first place.
That voice of "I" is exactly what Johnny Cash talks about in his interview. He was told he was a "song stylist" becasue he took another singer's song and made it his own. He stayed true to himself. Cash heard the song with his ears one way and in his mind another and so he sang it in a way that would make it unique to him. Cash had no way of knowing how acceptable his way would be until he actually put it out there.
A&P
2. I disagree with Gilbert Porter because the Sammy overreacted somewhat to the situation. He quit because Lengel told the girls that they were innapropriately dressed and needed to wear clothes over their bathing suits. Lengel wasn't embarassing the girls because they should have had shoes and clothes on. Sammy just wanted to impress the girls by sticking up for them and then by quitting. Only to realize that the girls did not care and were gone by the time he walked out.
4. The story was very descriptive and had many details. The specific details helped me actually picture the story as I was reading it. All the descriptions relate to the story's identity because they are all from Sammy's point of view and everything that he saw, with out any other person's side of the story.
Why I Write by Joan Didion
"Why I Write" was a very good title for Joan Didion's, even though she stole it. It stated in three words what she was going to tell you with a very good explanation. She did make me want to keep reading what she had to say like when she talks about shimmer and all the descriptions of pictures in the mind. She describes what goes on in her head while shes writing and how she makes sense of the pictures in her mind. I thought it was really interesting not only why but how Joan Didion writes. How she starts from the pictures she has, which have no meaning yet, with out any idea what the plot is even going to be. Then with however many pictures she has she makes them into pieces of the novel and builds off of them. With all those pieces she fits them all together on paper and turns it into a novel.
Sunday, February 13, 2011
Why I Write- Joan Didion
I like how she talks about how “She” writes in her papers, and I like the way she talks about grammar being “shimmer” it gives you a perspective that the grammar and the way your pronounce things makes a difference in a paper and changes the way you read a paper as well. The way she speaks about a picture giving her all the answers, and she isn’t the one looking for the answer. She sees a picture and narrates about it. It almost like she has an idea and a place and a picture all in her mind, and then she makes up a story and people to go along with it. Like the lady at the airport she made up, but she really did go to an airport. I think the fact that she didn’t know who any of these people were explain to her why she made the title of this “Why I Write” because she is the one making up all these different people. Not so much how she writes.
New Media Literacies
Two Readings and a Couple Videos....
Why I Write
I thought the interview with cash was a very cool little thing to watch. He was just explaining how when he would sing other peoples songs he would sing them in his own way. He knew it was not his song, and he knew he would not be able to sing the song like the original singers could, but he just wanted to sing it in his own way and he became very famous doing that. As long as you do things in your own way and not the same way other people do it, you are making yourself stand out and get noticed. If he would have just tried to copy how the original person sang it, then noone would have wanted to llisten to him. But since he did it his own way, he became very popular.
The other short video was about the new medias that people are dealing with today. It was a lot different back in the day but now everyone has so many different ways of getting in touch with someone else. And people are learning new things and trying to create new ways of media and to get information or advertisement out every single day.
After reading the “why I write” I was left a bit confused. At the end she had the twist that she really had no idea why people write and if she did she wouldn’t have to write novels about it. She was writing her novels based off a picture that she had in her mind and wrote based off that